This is a very good essay, Jess. You provided a good summary of events, although you were incorrect about one thing. You stated that hardly anybody got out of the towers alive, but there were 50,000 people working in the towers that day. 3000 people died, which means that many were able to evacuate.
You had an interesting take on the cost of 9/11. The war in Iraq was a direct result of the attacks, and it has been a huge drain on our economy. Nice connection.
This is a very good essay, Jess. You provided a good summary of events, although you were incorrect about one thing. You stated that hardly anybody got out of the towers alive, but there were 50,000 people working in the towers that day. 3000 people died, which means that many were able to evacuate.
ReplyDeleteYou had an interesting take on the cost of 9/11. The war in Iraq was a direct result of the attacks, and it has been a huge drain on our economy. Nice connection.
Overall a fine essay.
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